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Chameleon
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since 2002-08-07
Posts 99
Australia

0 posted 2002-08-16 09:30 PM


he stabbed the dark with an arrow," do you like me?"
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Not one word yet uttered, her Kaleidoscope eyes.
He thought she was sending thoughts disguised as spies. He felt his head growing heavy, as he wanted to sink into the ground. Hanging his head in a shying frenzy, the silence, which prevailed, was a dominance.

She was waiting for him, waiting to begin. He lifted his chin and felt her warm burning radiation.

He whispered drawing closer, 'why didn't you answer my question'?
She teased in her tone, 'Because you already know'.
As he revealed, their mouths met in bliss.
In its first parted awkwardness; it was their first kiss...

[This message has been edited by Chameleon (08-16-2002 09:35 PM).]

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Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2002-08-21 05:33 PM


What a lovely first kiss, I wish I could write with brevity.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Gemini
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since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203
Wisconsin, USA
2 posted 2002-08-22 08:20 PM


Ah the awkwardness of youth, you've described it well.
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