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LWF31407
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0 posted 2002-07-12 01:28 PM


A Man was vacationing in California.
Finally had he scraped up enough money to go there.
He sat down next to a woman. They looked at each other and smiled. He introiduced himself. She intorduced herself.
They talked a while. Finally she told him who she actually was, er professional name - He said "The Wrestling Diva?"
She said "SSSSSSSHHHHH! Yes."
He said "OK, I 've seen you on TV. Youre attractive. But youre not blonde"
She said "It's called make up and bleach. You've heard of them haent you?"
He said "OK. GOt it now. Hope I dont sound like an idiot. ANd hope you dont mind talking to me like this."
She said "NOt at all. It's nice to sit and talk to a man who will talk to the real me."
They talked some more. She told some terrible secrets of the industry.
"YOU AINT SERIOUS!" He said astonishingly.
"HOW IN THE WORLD DO YOU SURVIVE THAT?"
"It isnt easy." She  said , somberly.
And they talke dagain. By this time they had born each others souls to the other.
He said. "I have to go back to my hotel room. It was nice to speak with you."
She pleaded. "DONT LEAVE PLEASE! Stay with me."
He checked his watch - "Tell you what. Come to my hotel room with me. "
She smiled in gleefull anticipation.
"SOmehow or another, I feel completely, COMPLETELY safe with you asking me that. I'd be delighted to go to your hotel with you."
They got into his car, rather modest car. He drove. They talked some more. She told him of terrible secrets inthe industry.
He listened, astonished.
By now she was cryigng uncontrollably, curled up next to him like a little baby in it's moomma's arms. He had the ldft hand on the wheel. The  right arm was around his love. THey went back to his hotel room.
Ordered Chinese Take out and Pizza. He fixed them both a scotch and soda. NOw they were alone. NO cameras, no leering droolin gfans. Just them.
She said "Dear. I feel I can tell and show you anything." And she told him ALL! He was dumbfounded. HE was about to crying too.
AND THEN--------------the moment came. He stood up. Took her by thehand, kissed her deeply. Commenced to remove articles of her atire. And she did to him likewise.
IN time there before him she stood. No make up, No BLeach, NO ANYTHING. Her soul she bore to him. ANd now her body. HER REAL BODY! Scarred, torn , bruised, beaten. Not what the TV shoed. (Ratings)
An dh etook her right hand into his left one.
Said dreamily
"You are the most beautiful woman in the world to me. "
She said (while tears were staining her face, and in anicipation) - "LKook me in RIGHT IN THE EYE and say that."
And he looked he r right in the eye and said. Withour flinshing
"You are the most beatufiul woman in this world to me YOu really are."
SHe knew he meant it. Wasnt just talking. And tears again come flooding out.
"And you are the most beautiful man."
Becoming meshed and enclapsed in each others trembling arms. Two becae one that night, IN EVERY WAY. After a long deep and satisfying consumatoin. She started to wail uncontrollably.
He said "Dear, I DIDNT HURT YOU, DID I!"
She said , tremblingly "Oh, NO Sweetheart, You didnt hurt me at all. You only helped, in every way dear. In every way."
They fell asleep in each oothers arms, WRAPPED TIGHTLY ROUND EACH OTHER! Awakening, they shared passions deepest kiss.
And jsut gazed into each others eyes all that day.
They ordered more pizza and HCInese take ou that night.
He asked her...."I dont know if I should ask you this. I'm going to. WIll you come home with me.
I'm a school teacher at the locak high school back home.
My brother is the High School footbal coach in our home town. He can get you a job as somen's coach."
She smiled. "I would like that VERY much I love you very much."
And I love you too.

ANd the coule went back to his hometown. The shackles broken, The Teacher  and the coach.
They married. And remianed together for the rest of their days. She was so happy. He was so hapy.

Which is how it should be.


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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-07-12 01:30 PM


As always good poetry

Cold hands means a warm heart

LWF31407
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2 posted 2002-07-12 01:36 PM


TY loner. Have  anice day and a GR8 Weekend! Lewis
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3 posted 2002-07-12 08:52 PM




YAY!!! Awwwwwwwww, this is such a wonderful and unique love story, sweet friend, I believe every love story has a cliffhanger and you speak of one so well here! (smiles) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

LWF31407
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4 posted 2002-07-12 10:04 PM


Glad to have shared, dear noah. In The Philadelphian SPirit, lewis
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5 posted 2002-08-01 05:55 PM


WHAT?? UHHH...??  creative?
LWF31407
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6 posted 2002-08-01 06:20 PM


whatever!
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