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CourtneyNdremeda
Junior Member
since 2000-11-13
Posts 15


0 posted 2000-11-28 11:36 PM


You fall into an obvlivian and then all of a sudden you snap out of it and you can't figure out how you got there or how to get yourself out.

So then you keep spiraling downwards only the difference is now you're fully aware of your recesion.  Deeper and deaper, and you're detatched from it all...you're viewing it all through a window.

And then you realise that you've sucken too deap to get yourself out.  You realise that for the rest of your life you're going to keep viewing yourself falling down that spiral, and the hardest thing of all is that you know you'll never be able to stop yourself from falling.

And that leaves you with only one choice.

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Ruby dagger
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since 1999-08-01
Posts 76
Wyoming, MN, U.S.A
1 posted 2000-12-10 10:36 PM


This sends out a good and strong message. I like it.

Luv

Kelly

"At the right time and place, a question was more deadly than any sword." -Mercedes Lackey

CourtneyNdremeda
Junior Member
since 2000-11-13
Posts 15

2 posted 2000-12-11 10:35 PM


Thanks

: )


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