The Fated Dance---final song

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The Fated Dance---final song

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

0 posted 2000-08-24 02:33 PM

   His mouth drops open in disbelief. He gazes at this vision, this water sprite, covered in glistening droplets, as she splashes and laughs at him.
   To say she is a dream come true doesnt even come close to how he feels at this moment. To think that by leaving one moment sooner he would have missed this dance.
   He holds his hand out to her, all the love he feels shining in those warm brown eyes. All the laughter leaves her at his look. She takes his hand, and he pulls her into his arms.
   "Forever," he whispers."Forever in just one dance."


               DO YOU BELIEVE?

Wilfred Yeats
Member Elite

since 2000-08-04

Posts 2704
Wilmington, Delaware

1 posted 2000-08-25 10:00 AM

truly lovely Paula - i really wondered howyou'd end this - - let's see a second ending in our preferred forum ~WG~

Dawn Eclipse
Senior Member

since 2000-01-31

Posts 637
The Horsehead Nebula

2 posted 2000-08-26 03:34 PM

That was a wonderful piece. thanks for the read

"Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today"
~Broadway Musical RENT~

*Cassandra Roseen*

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