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0 posted 2000-08-06 09:38 PM


Sometimes she watches the sun go down, and wishes she could be that perfect. All of those colors, and the little rays of light, but her life is far from perfect, she thinks, as she gazes at the sand. Nobody's ever perfect, but why couldn't she be just a little closer to it? Then the tears begin to fall, like rain, the kind of rain you just stand in, the kind you know you'll never get out of, so you just don't try. That's always when the sun begins to blur, and her eyes start to burn, and then she starts to get up and walk home...

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Can I just say pretty... and bummer. Bright and sad.  
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