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Jenn Cirrincione
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0 posted 2000-07-24 03:44 PM


I look into his eyes and see what once was. Some awful, terrible wind has taken away what I was given. I thought I was happy... I wish things had been different. He smiles at me as if he KNOWS. He feels me completely... yet I know that's not the case. I wish he could see the confusion in my eyes. I want to change the past. Give me a chance to know what I want. To know what I need. I feel as if I'm preparing for the death of something..is it the best thing for us? Should we even speak? The light in your eyes counteracts with the abrasive quality in your speech. Love thy neighbor... until he hurts you... Until he rips out your heart with a spoon.

This is for the most dramatic, confusing, loving, hurtful man I have ever met in my life. If you ever read this, the spoon reference should let you know who you are.

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Christopher
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1 posted 2000-07-26 02:14 AM


I'm not him, but I think I catch the reference as a movie recollection... as to the rest.. ouch. Life hurts sometimes, does it not?

Christopher

Now with the wisdom of years
I try to reason things out
And the only people I fear
Are those who never have doubt.
-Billy Joel

Erin
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2 posted 2000-07-27 02:17 AM


well what can us girls say about guys??? some are dogs but there are guys out there that are not. im sorry a guy made you feel this way. but its a consequence of life that we go through, getting our heart broken but also breaking hearts.

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

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