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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
This is to the only person I love and have loved My lady its long since we've spoken or written. But everyday I think about you and feel that we've a connection even now which will never die as long as we live. But never again I'll act with desperation or frustration. I'll love you always and you know it. You very well know we are in a complicated relationship and thats what I fear the most. I'm trusting you with all I am but I fear to lead as I'm not sure where are we being carried. As we know each other well we'll lead together. To be frank I've never given a thought of us together in a long and committed relationship till a year back. But now when I think of a committed relationship you're not with me anymore. Don't even think that I'm not with you. All I want is to take it real slow. Even if I'm not expressing it to you, remember I think about you. I haven't changed even a little from the time I met you as my lover. Everything done was done with frustration from the fact that I seemingly receive no love. You may have your reasons. But if you look from my point and see, you'll probably be the same. Teach me how should I feel when you say that you like someone else. Even I did my best to fetch you what you wanted. I have come to realise that god created in us something good which will be recognised by someone and they'll love us for it. So never feel that I've found someone if I'm silent. I'm working on a plan you and me to be together and lets see how far it goes. I'd like you to work on it too. I'll not be dismayed with the negative outcome. Life goes on. Though it may not be the same without you. If my silence dismays you think that its for the best. We need a break where we need to feel how bad or may be good it is if we are not together. It may be a month or a year or more but eventually if we realise the need for eachother's love we may hug and kiss. We'll be together.Otherwise we'll go on in separate ways thinking it s for the best. Till then lets stick to the plan. I see that there are pressures from many ends but its the only way I see thats good. Dont yield to it. I love you always. Its not a lie. Its a sincere expression of me. A_L |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
I read this and it's very heartfelt...but I don't really have any suggestion for a title and the only other thing I can suggest is maybe running a spell check on it  |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
well written...very true words I sense... If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
How about "Love Letter" as the title?  |
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