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Jenn Cirrincione
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0 posted 2000-07-13 09:13 AM


I feel like I'm running through a dark woods... and it's cold. The lonely feeling is returning. Empty promises always seem to rear their ugly heads and tell me that I'm wrong. Wrong to act the way that I do, wrong to feel the way that I do. Why? I just keep thinking that I can't always be wrong, and one day, I will do something right. So I look on through this wood and see a lot of darkness. The trees are stripped bare, bare as my soul. Calling a name out into the never-ending darkness, there is no answer. Reaching out to anybody that would listen, and getting nowhere. I'm scared, and alone, and I can't see the future. Is it even there?

+Spur of the moment thoughts, Not really a story, but it puts down my darkest feelings, and some of my innermost insecurities.


[This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 07-13-2000).]

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AVANTI
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1 posted 2000-07-13 11:30 PM


been there...know the feeling...
well written

If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves
from which evolves the light...
Avanti Rao


Christopher
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2 posted 2000-07-18 08:03 AM


Let me echo Avanti... been there done that, have the t-shirt!  

Thanks for sharing!

Christopher

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