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Passions in Prose

Me,Myself and I

Ardonida
Member

since 2000-05-18

Posts 76

0 posted 2000-05-19 07:21 PM

Well, here is my 1st attempt at prose. I know nutting about it, but I read some of everyone elses stuff, and here is a 1st try. Does repetition count as wrong?? I would love to know.

You often say you know me,
but let me tell you myself,
no one knows me like I.

You generally thin you see me,
but might I inform you myself,
You see what is chosen by only I.

You firmly believe you hear me,
but let me disagree myself,
you only hear what this one is saying, I.

My, myself and I,
can you tell the differance>
me is who you think I am,
chosen so by myself.
And yet, you see only one person,
maybe yu should think upon that thought.

A.

WolfsMate
Member

since 2000-01-14

Posts 121
New York

1 posted 2000-05-19 08:26 PM

It's more of a poem then prose. Other than a few spelling mistakes, I enjoyed it. Hope to see more from you.

"You never have to worry...Never fear for I am near"

Ardonida
Member

since 2000-05-18

Posts 76

2 posted 2000-05-20 02:28 PM

oy!! spelling has never been a strong point of mine!..
but thank you, let me have another try at it.
A.

Dusk Treader

Moderator

Senior Member

since 1999-06-18

Posts 1187
St. Paul, MN

3 posted 2000-05-20 02:35 PM

WolfsMate is right, this is more of a poem than prose so I'll be moving it to Open for you. If you have any questions email me.

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