The Four Orbs of Fabled Brilliance

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Passions in Prose

The Four Orbs of Fabled Brilliance

EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

0 posted 2000-03-12 11:13 PM

If you grow tired of the platitudes of life, then listen to what I have to say.
Travel the great yellow wood.
Continue for miles upon miles, until you come upon a small clearing, where four orbs of energy eternally float.
And the snow must fall true,
From a boundless blue sky.
In the center of these orbs, you will see a circle of carefully placed stones.
Sit in the circle, and clear your mind,
And leave behind the stress that is forever at your side.
Facing north, there is a sapphire orb of wealth, in glowing colors of harmony with the ocean and sky.
And south, there is the wisdom orb, emerald green, shining eternally in a brilliant jungle glow.
Facing east, there is a deep red orb of flaring ruby abundance, this one is the orb of love.
And east, an orb of a color matching the shade of the twinkling stars, appearing to be as one itself, in a shifting and churning void of gentle white light. This orb is the orb of your fate.
Now meditate, and keep your mind clear. If your serenity rings true....Four rays of spiraling light will shoot from the very sky with a thunderclap of mystical explosion, and take you to a better place.
See for yourself.

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

1 posted 2000-03-13 08:08 PM

Where is this place!? I need to go there.. very clear writing!

Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

2 posted 2000-03-14 10:30 PM

Exellent work! I want to go there too..very clear, image filled writing. I enjoyed it very much.

*Krista Knutson*

I do this so this world will know that it will not change me....-GB

LoveBug

Moderator

Member Elite

since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

3 posted 2000-03-15 04:21 PM

This is a beautiful piece with great imagery. Keep up the good work!

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde

Marilyn
Member Elite

since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2000-03-16 01:38 PM

The problem with being constaintly late is, you get to ditto the comments before you. You have some wonderful imeragy in this piece and I thoroughly enjoyed reading this.

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.