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Corey Collier
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since 2000-01-13
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0 posted 2000-02-25 12:07 PM



I can feel her wrapping my heart with her gentle touch.  Though she doesn't know she is.  She has trapped every memory of me and locked it away deep inside her.  She is scared, she can't think of any reason to keep it locked up.  I'm trying to break free, trying to pick that lock, but it doesn't give.  I need her to give me the key.  My copy doesn't work anymore.  Why does love hurt so much??

Corey

Here is a quote, a very important one.  "If you love someone so much that you would die for them, never attempt suicide.  Because the hurt that it causes her and everyone around you ruins any chance of healing your own heart.  And she has to live the rest of her life knowing that someone tried killing themself for her."

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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
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Hurricane Alley
1 posted 2000-02-26 12:13 PM


Wow...a lot of power in these few paragraphs. Good job.
Salooma
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since 2000-01-28
Posts 781

2 posted 2000-02-27 02:43 AM


This is definatly a nice post. So short yet extremly powerful. Very nice piece  

Salma

 "Not all the answers lie within your realm or mine, they lie within the borders."

Grandma Jo
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since 2000-01-02
Posts 51

3 posted 2000-02-27 06:38 PM


Very wise words, and so powerfully written!
childomine
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL
4 posted 2000-02-28 11:25 PM


A very touching post.  The key is love and it hurts so not to have our key fit anothers heart.  Your quote is right on.  Suicide does nothing but create more pain for those left behind.


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