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Sasikat
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0 posted 2000-02-04 07:51 PM


Love is oneness.  It is a God given gift that is bestowed upon two individuals.  It comes from deep within the heart.  It creates a bond that can never be broken.  When one flies high, the other sprouts wings and they soar along together.  When one feels pain, the other suffers - even more so in watching the experience of it and feeling helpless in not being able to eliminate it.  When one feel joy, then the other is joyous in the pleasure of seeing happiness shine within the other's eyes.  They give their minds, their hearts and their souls to each other.  Together they are entwined, bonded permanently to become one.  They are within each other and apart, they are only half.  Together, they are whole.  Love unites to become one.  Love is eternal.  Eternity is their love and they will reunite to again become whole.  Life is but a moment in time, quickly passing to become the past.  For, they are only temporary in this life that brings much sorrow.  Each day their end draws nearer.  Comfort is taken in knowing that one day after their separation, they will again become one and will live together forever in God's world of eternal love.


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Dusk Treader
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1 posted 2000-02-04 11:41 PM


Nice little piece on love.  It certainly is a feeling of oneness, and a feeling one certainly strives to find.  Thanks for posting  

 In flames I shall not be consumed, but reborn. -- Abrahm Simons


Christopher
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2 posted 2000-02-05 04:00 AM


Beautiful!
Welcome to Passions In Prose!

Love is indeed a beautiful, sometimes tragic thing. I believe it can be shared by many and appreciated by only a few. Enjoy it when recognized and seek it when none is evident!!!
Thank you for this, it's refresshing to see something to warm the heart!  

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26
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Ontario, CANADA
3 posted 2000-02-06 09:49 AM


Sasikat:


     I loved this piece!  And the title is perfect.  I only wish that I could find love like the way you have described it. Obviously, you are in love. Well written!

       Take care,
         Melissa Honeybee      

Destiny'sChild
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since 2000-03-27
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4 posted 2000-03-27 08:02 AM


you decribe love very well! I could learn a lot from you
                       Destiny

Mellon Collie
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since 2000-03-25
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5 posted 2000-03-27 11:13 AM


dear sasikat,
     quite a lovely piece.  comes at a very appropriate moment for me as i sit and think about the one i share such a close bond with. one, i would believe, as special and close as that which you have here described. thank you for reminding me what it is to be loved.  

sincerely,
the beautiful freak

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