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One Who Understands
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0 posted 2000-02-03 12:46 PM


Inseperable

As I hold your hand tonight, life is covered up by a thick warm blanket, woven with threads of love.  Nothing else matters.  Your hand is in mine tonight.  And only tonight exists.  The warmth of your breath, as you whisper in my ear, draws me closer.  And for a moment it feels like our hearts are inseparable. And I look at your soft hair draped over your eyes.  I raise my hand, and gently hold it aside, revealing the sparkling sapphires that make me shiver in amazement.  Then time seems to stop.  No moment is more precious than complete communication and understanding, without words.  Slowly, calmly, gently, our lips meet.  An instant sense of relaxation steadily overcomes me.  And it seems that to be with you, can only be imagined.  Like a moment this wonderful can only exist in dreams.  If only for tonight, I can be with you.  Then I surrender.  Only eternity without a chance, can truly describe hell.  If only for tonight is the way it must be, then let it be.  Take me away when I fall asleep.

Unless of course, we are inseparable.



 

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Dusk Treader
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1 posted 2000-02-03 04:22 PM


Nice piece of work here... Ahh, being with that special one   Finding the one you're inseperable from has got to be something everyone dreams of...   Enjoyed.

 In flames I shall not be consumed, but reborn. -- Abrahm Simons


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2 posted 2000-02-03 06:36 PM


oh.. A wonderful work! It must be wonderful to be with the one you love! Keep up the good work!  

 "To the world you may be one person, but to one person you may be the world"

Saxoness
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3 posted 2000-02-03 08:34 PM


truly, you have captured a wonderful moment.
Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration
4 posted 2000-02-05 04:18 AM


Once again tis e'en I quote "Carpe Diem!"
Sieze the day/moment, for it is the stuff from whence fond memories grow!!!

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