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Tamma
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In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

0 posted 2000-01-27 12:04 PM


Why can't i lie in bed and cry, cry, cry? The image of death is around me, I shall not be here anymore, in a few short weeks. His scent surrounds me, leaving me unable to break free from his grasp. I am his puppet, he controls me, I have no control over myself. When I cry, he controls it. Hes about to control me again. Hes in charge of all my pain, and the people in the outside wortld do not see it.

 *how was i to kno that today id meet someone like you? how was i to see the light with him in my path and you too far to touch?*


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1 posted 2000-01-27 04:55 PM


Sometimes it all seems like were marionettes dancing on the strings of some unknown master of puppets.  Though we may feel this way, we do have some control of our lives, life is balanced, things will get better.  Good piece describing these feelings of hopelessness, I hope things improve for you soon      

 In flames I shall not be consumed, but reborn. -- Abrahm Simons



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Purgatorial Incarceration
2 posted 2000-01-28 05:44 AM


YOU are in charge of all your pain!!!
And writing it out can certainly helps sometimes! It is welcome here always!

Tamma
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3 posted 2000-01-28 07:27 PM


i wrote this in math one day, and in the middle of writing it, i got a whiff of my ex's colonge

 *how was i to kno that today id meet someone like you? how was i to see the light with him in my path and you too far to touch?*



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