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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho 
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Metamorphosis sucks doesn't it..? [This message has been edited by lucky (edited 06-01-2000).] |
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Dusk Treader
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since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
Welcome to Passions! Now this is an interestingly delivered piece, just a request, next time would you use a different font? The combination of no punctuation or paragraphing and this font boggled my eyes  Lots of good descriptions and running ideas, very unique presentation! Kind of trippy, man...  < !signature--> In flames I shall not be consumed, but reborn. -- Abrahm Simons [This message has been edited by Dusk Treader (edited 01-24-2000).] |
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kaleidoscope Junior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 38 |
Outrageous imagery! A wealth of sensual metaphors. You got all the senses involved, here. Far out and out of sight! Enough to supply someone with fantasies all night! Just subtle enough to have class, and just blatant enough to raise the libido. Took some serious eye-strain to keep these old eyeballs on line as I read, but it was well worth it. |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
WELCOME!!! Agreed with the eye-strain. Perhaps some paragraph breaks, (scritch-scritch) The imagery was magnificent though! |
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