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Tamma
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0 posted 2000-01-24 07:43 PM



I HAVE ALWAYS BEEN A LONELY PERSON, EVEN IN A CROWD I AM BY MYSELF I HAVE NO 'FRIENDS' I HAVE NO 'FAMILY' ...........I DONT EVEN HAVE MYSELF FOR MY MIND IS GONE AND SO IS MY HEART I'VE GIVEN EVERYTHING AWAY. ALL THATS LEFT IS THE EMPTY SHELL THAT IS MY FLESH AND INSIDE THE BLOOD RUNS COLD. THERE IS NO NEED FOR LOVE FOR WHAT IS THERE TO LOVE BUT A CORPSE? I DONT AND CAN'T LOVE NOW BECAUSE WHERE MY HEART IS MY LOVE GOES ALSO MY LIFE IS ISOLATION I AM THE SOLITARY CREEPER ALONE IN THE DARKNESS ON THE OUTSIDE PEERING INTO A WORLD WERE EVERYONE IS BLIND TO  MY EXISTANCE.

 *how was i to kno that today id meet someone like you? how was i to see the light with him in my path and you too far to touch?*

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kitkat
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1 posted 2000-01-24 07:55 PM


Wow this is pretty profound. I enjoyed this. Hope he can find himself.
Nagemx
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2 posted 2000-01-24 08:04 PM


wow.  I'm glad that my ex wasn't that deep (or that good a writer, whichever applies.)  If he had been, he might now be my ex now.  Much luck to your former.  

 Never regret

Dusk Treader
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3 posted 2000-01-24 08:59 PM


Bravo!  Send my congrats to your ex as this is a very well written piece, I could almost feel my own blood begin to chill, Excellent!

 In flames I shall not be consumed, but reborn. -- Abrahm Simons



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4 posted 2000-01-25 02:10 AM


If you are able, please tell your ex that it is impossible for him to be just a corpse of meaningless flesh.  For if all his love is given away, I have never met such a wonderful person.  And I recognize his exsistence, all I have to do is look in the mirror.
Tamma
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5 posted 2000-01-25 11:00 AM


i admit that hes deep when he writes, but we were going out when he wrote this, and the part "THERE IS NO NEED FOR LOVE " it freaked me out...wouldnt you be a bit freaked?

 *how was i to kno that today id meet someone like you? how was i to see the light with him in my path and you too far to touch?*

Christopher
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6 posted 2000-01-28 05:40 AM


Hmm... no offense, but this seems like someone with some self-esteem issues. Perhaps if you could reassure him that what he writes isn't true, that life sometimes just feels that way...
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