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Maitay Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 158Sisters,OR,USA |
Something about me draws in the type of people that I try to avoid. THose that will hurt me and walk all over this tender heart. Asking me to have faith in them, but then destroying all that has bonded us. So many times I have given away my heart, to freinds and lovers, and yet each time they use me. My heart and body and neither play toys, or something for someones personal enjoyment. I hate this world sometimes, wishing to run away and never know another person. Trapped alone in a forest that is only my home, giving me the knowledge that none will enter my security to hurt me. Every true freindship was ripped away, and every love put out. I let him in for one last time, the next he'll not survive my rage. I'll let go of control and destroy his happyness along with mine. just a thought about being used by every guy that has ever entered my life, except one, who is currently wipped and thinks I am satan becuase that is what his girlfriend thinks. grrr... hmmm...< !signature--> ~The price of finding love is to eventually lose it. When I wish on a falling star, I wish not for material goods but to show kindness to others and be content with what the world may offer me~ ~Maitay Mirabel Litton~ [This message has been edited by Christopher (edited 01-08-2000).] |
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Angela16 Junior Member
since 1999-11-19
Posts 37USA |
Good job on writing out your thoughts. But, if you don't want guys to take advantage of you than don't give them an opportunity to. Angela |
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Angela16 Junior Member
since 1999-11-19
Posts 37USA |
Good job on writing out your thoughts. But, if you don't want guys to take advantage of you than don't give them an opportunity to. Angela |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
This is a great way to write down your thoughts. I do not see any poetic form nor rhyming in this piece. Looks more like a prose piece then poetry. I am moving this to the prose forum. Thanks. Marilyn. |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
LOL @ Satan! Well written in your anger Maitay! |
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Quiet Lightning Member
since 1999-12-26
Posts 56 |
That's the same way I feel about love sometimes. I just hope to find love in another person.But the only problem is that I don't open myself up to the right people |
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