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debbiemac
Junior Member
since 1999-11-19
Posts 19
Lodi, CA USA

0 posted 1999-11-19 06:35 PM


"Mama!" she cried, "please don't leave me, I don't want you to go.
What would I do without you, Mama?
I don't want to know."

"Child" said Mama, "you have brought to me much joy and happiness
throughout the years,
smile for me and wipe away those tears.

I am not sad, please don't be for me.
If ever you get lonely, just close your eyes and you'll see...

I am always with you, wherever you may go
For I live within you,
Heart, mind and soul."

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Copyright 1999 Debbie McGranahan

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© Copyright 1999 debbiemac - All Rights Reserved
merlynh
Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 411
deer park, wa
1 posted 1999-11-19 10:25 PM


Nice read. It's sort of pleasant to see someone who can write.
Marilyn
Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
2 posted 1999-11-20 12:37 PM


I read this in open and I am glad it found it's way here. Welcome to Passions.

Merlyn...may I ask what that comment means?

debbiemac
Junior Member
since 1999-11-19
Posts 19
Lodi, CA USA
3 posted 1999-11-20 01:54 AM


merlynh and marilyn-thank you so much for your comments.

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Debbie

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