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Lorelei54
Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 458

0 posted 1999-11-17 09:24 PM

A weekday evening, a common dinner, but with candles and low light, it becomes a magical night. A fire burning, the black sky crisp, the flames leap and burn, as the green logs sizzle. And tonight as I lay my weary head upon my husbands chest to sleep, I know this common day, will turn into a perfect night. And as the sun draws open my sleep filled eyes, he will be the first I see as I arise. I say all this to whisper a loving prayer...God was very good to me today.

[This message has been edited by Lorelei54 (edited 11-18-1999).]

X Angel
Senior Member

since 1999-11-07

Posts 1521
Oregon

1 posted 1999-11-17 09:49 PM

Sometimes I think we all get way more than we deserve. Sounds like Nirvanah,

, have fun! This was great....I could visualize it! I love prose

*hugs*
~X~

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Christopher

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-02

Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration

2 posted 1999-11-18 01:40 AM

Beautiful indeed!
I think the greatest talent lies within those who can express so much with so few words, as you have done here!
(I feel all warm and fuzzy inside!)

Lorelei54
Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 458

3 posted 1999-11-18 07:47 AM

Thank you Angel and Chris...I too feel warm and fuzzy within his love and the shelter of my life...

Pepper
Member Elite

since 1999-08-19

Posts 3079
Southern Florida

4 posted 1999-11-18 09:24 AM

How very lovely Lorelei! This piece evokes "warm and fuzzy" feelings.....
Enjoyed this much!

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!

Deep Blue Me
Member

since 1999-11-04

Posts 396
By a big lake

5 posted 1999-11-18 02:55 PM

From a chest's point of view, This was sweeter than maple candy. I long for the possibility of nights so warm. Mmmmm...nice.

DB

Lorelei54
Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 458

6 posted 1999-11-18 10:02 PM

Thank you for the comments one and all...

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

7 posted 1999-11-20 05:18 PM

I agree with Christopher

but I always feel fuzzy inside

I enjoyed very much Lorelei!

Jenny Lee

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.

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