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suicidal dreams
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0 posted 1999-11-09 09:12 PM


This is a story by one of my friends her names Debi. The reason im posting it is so all you people can read her words since she for the obvious reason that she doesnt know about this site JUST YET. If you want to reply to her directly her e-mail is brite_spice@yahoo.com
You can also feel free to reply here since im giving her this site address after I post this for her.

I walk into a big ballroom, there are candles lighting up the room, and in the far corner sits a man, the most beautiful man I think I have ever seen. The first thing that I notice is that his skin is so very pale, but he has a very warming glow to him, it would make any woman burn with desire
The long flowing locks of dark hair look as if they are made of velvet. His eyes so green and vibrant, I know they can see all of me, my thoughts...

Something catches my eye; I glance across the ballroom just in time to see a woman walk through the doors. She is quite possibly the most beautiful creature I have ever seen in the eternity that I call my life. She strides proudly towards the center of the room with her creamy white skin and wavy black hair. As I slowly start to look her over, the first thing that jumps out at me is her eyes, they appear to be on fire; burning with a need for something, some sort of desire. At that moment I decide, that I must meet this woman.

I slowly rise from the bench I was seated at, and make my way across the crowded floor to confront this beautiful woman. Closer and closer I walk, feeling the heat from her body rise. I can tell that she is young and full of life. All new emotions are flowing through my body, ones I have not felt in what it seems like an eternity. With only 10 feet between us now, she looks into my eyes. It seems to me that she is looking for something, like she knew what I was. We are only a few feet apart now; her skin becomes flushed as her eyes lock in to mine.

As this man approaches me, I feel myself strangely drawn to him. I feel myself unconsciously walking towards him. My eyes are now looking deep into his; there is something in them that I long for. This desire I long for I know is undeniable. These thoughts I have, make me fear myself, fear the actions I may take because of them. These thoughts reveal such strange desires, ones I have never felt before, all so new and tempting; so tempting that I find them impossible to resist, as I rapidly approach this man. I know not what will happen when I meet this man in just a few moments, but I do know that I want it to happen, whatever it may be. Whatever he wishes, I feel compelled to comply, it is like some strange spell has been cast upon me, that I am unable and even unwilling to try to break it. I find myself now standing in front of this strange man now.
He whispers, “Come with me.”
He turns and walks to the door, not even looking back, because he knows I am under his spell and will follow. I must follow him. I must go because I am unable to go against his spoken word. I feel compelled; there is a want, quiet possibly even a need for me to follow. To figure out why I am so drawn to a man, I have never met before.
He exits the ballroom into the quiet night, and walks up, the road at a quick pace. I find myself struggling to keep up with him. I feel an urgency to keep up for if I don’t, I feel I shall surely die. Up ahead of me he enters a doorway, and disappears inside the building. I run frantically to the building, and open the door just in time to see him at the top of a flight of stairs, and turn down a hallway. I burst up the stairs and watched a door a little ways down the hallway close. I timidly approach to the door to knock, it suddenly opens, and I see that man staring out the window towards the road some ten feet from the door. Nervously I walk in the flat towards him.
He turns around, very slowly, he looks into my eyes. I can see that he needs something. And only I can give him what he needs. He walks towards me and puts a hand on my face. His touch feels so cold, it chills my whole body, but still I feel the warmth towards him. His other hand just strokes my silky black hair. His hand runs the length of my hair and his hand is now on my back, just caressing me. His hand that was on my face now is touching my neck, a warm sensation now runs through my body, he just looks with a lustful hunger in his eyes.


His lips are now kissing my neck. I can feel how hungry he is now, that he needs a drink. I feel his sharp fangs pierce my soft skin. Now I know, I know he is the one for me, I feel all his lust as he drinks from my neck. My hands are just holding his body close to mine. He is no longer cold, only warm and filling himself with me. I feel something for him, unlike I have felt for any other man, I know I have to be with him for the rest of eternity, I whisper, “Make me like you.... I want to feel everything you feel, see what you see, and taste all that you have ever tasted.”

He takes his sharpened nail and cuts a wound from me to drink. I put my lips around his bleeding flesh and I drink his blood, making him part of me now.

I lay him on his back for he has weakened greatly, he seems so frail, but his soul is so strong and full of life.
“Now I am just like you, you are my creator, and for that, I will love you always,” I whisper into your ear.
I put my neck to his mouth, “I want you to drink from me, and I will make you strong again.”
He pierces my soft skin once again, and begins to drain me of my blood. I can feel myself growing weaker by the minute. He sees in my eyes that I will love him always, and the feeling returns, the need and lust for me as I felt will always for him.




[This message has been edited by suicidal dreams (edited 11-09-1999).]

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Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

1 posted 1999-11-10 05:06 AM


Vampires are a favorite of mine.Nicely done

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

JennyLee
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since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
2 posted 1999-11-11 09:10 AM


Excellent read

Jen

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