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sparrow
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since 1999-10-22
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0 posted 1999-10-25 11:54 PM


Pride


And then I saw them; the mind boggling, inner-space refueling, flat-out In-Your-Face booshkers, with that "eat my dust" grin starring back at my own horrified self, freaking out all of those who opposed their flesh eating laughs while they just stared people to death and enjoyed every ear-piercing heartbeat of their unsuspecting, everyday run-of-the-meal, normal, Pepe loving victims; then with their insightful, deranging, complex thoughts echoing out into the cold, dank, moon-lit night as they spoke of old action packed, swash buckling, blood filled escapades in which they instilled fear in the hearts of huge goal smashing, one eyed, nine foot, can crushing, giants that thought basketball was a way of life. Then they turned to the incinerating flames, where they burned the dreams of foes, and started cheering the gates of Archflambeoth and the unleashing of the marshmellow bunnies, when I remembered that I helped create and am a part of this band of Hug-Loving Freaks that tear life at the seams just to peek inside,
     And I'm Proud.


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Sparrow Hawk
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merlynh
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 411
deer park, wa
1 posted 1999-10-26 08:14 PM


You got something here. Keep working at it. It's coming around for you.
sparrow
Junior Member
since 1999-10-22
Posts 33

2 posted 1999-10-27 12:32 PM


Thanks!

This is an old one I did for The Hug Loving Freaks, the group of friends I hung out with in school. I chopped it up a bit and put it on a T-Shirt, and it was a nessesity to put in our book ;}

But if you don't read it or say it really really fast, then you miss half the point...

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Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration
3 posted 1999-10-27 05:14 AM


Welcome to passions in Prose!
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