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sparrow
Junior Member
since 1999-10-22
Posts 33


0 posted 1999-10-25 11:49 PM


Wish I May, Wish I didn't


     Suddenly an unusual wish flew around the room. Not a grand wish like wanting the ability to shoot holes in sneakers with eye lasers to get new shoes, or five million dollars to blow at the local mini-mall, just a small tiny wish that everyone wishes at one time in their life. It wasn't a big room either, which made the wish seem more unusual than any other unusual wish. You see, this wish was flying around a mushroom, trying to get inside because the wish had the bizarre notion that the person that was supposed to wish the wish was in the mushroom. Its first reaction to not being able to get in the mushroom was that it was one of those rare wishes that know that they are to be wished before they are wished, but being such a small wish that is made every day, on the hour, it dismissed that for impossible. Not to mention it was always wished years before it arrived on location, kind of like the cable guy. Suddenly, just as suddenly as the wish had appeared around the room, a guy who had just wished that he had some food in his stomach, flew off of his bike, which had abruptly stopped inconsiderately after getting its front tire stuck in the ditch, and landed at the exasct angle needed to have the mushroom crammed into his throat. Likewise, the mushroom was at the exact angle in his throat, that to breath the guy had to swallow it. After two laps of flying around the guy, the wish decided that it had been granted, and was on its way.

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Sparrow Hawk
Jester of http://www.scribedesigns.com/archflambeoth/

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Systematic Decay
Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........
1 posted 1999-10-26 12:22 PM


This is very interesting to say the least....best to be read slowly and carefully.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

sparrow
Junior Member
since 1999-10-22
Posts 33

2 posted 1999-10-26 12:37 PM


If this one is hard to understand, then you'd better not read "Mind Blankets"...

For some reason I'm really into complicated, and this is one of my easier to understand prose peices...

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Sparrow Hawk
Jester of http://www.scribedesigns.com/archflambeoth/

cullin
New Member
since 1999-10-25
Posts 4
houston tx
3 posted 1999-10-26 06:31 AM


i like this a lot. very funky. in my humble opinion "great!!"
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