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Richard 33
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since 1999-09-09
Posts 187
glen easton, wv usa

0 posted 1999-10-24 01:47 PM


Last night I danced with a golden angel, she
sat next to me, at first we talked of many things, and years gone by. Even though we were separated by a screen, typed words, and
800 miles, I felt drawn to her, like somehow
I knew her well, it was like her soul was there in my very presense, our souls bared,
lept out, and were intwined, and danced a
very divine dance, for hours we danced, I felt the embrace of her soul against mine.
It felt so good, it was like I have known
her forever. Her gentle nature, the sweetness
of her words, they captivated me, they left
me hungering for more. Such a beautiful
person, you have captured my soul, you are in
my heart. I want to know you, and would travel anywhere to achieve it. I want to give
you roses, I want to hold the door for you, I
want to give you what you need to feel whole
again. I want to be your protective hand, to
keep you safe from harm, I want to be the soul that keeps you warm on those cold rainy
nights, my dearest golden angel, you add
a shining light to my life, one equaled by
no other, angel do thy hear my heart beating?
Angel, do you feel my soul yearning? Someday
I hope to be dancing in your arms. With your
charms you have reached deep inside to my
deepest depths, It is so, that I will never be the same.

© Copyright 1999 Richard 33 - All Rights Reserved
Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
1 posted 1999-10-24 01:59 PM


Wow Richard. *tears dancing in my eyes*. To have been able to touch you in such a way. I am speachless. You are a very special man and I am honored to dance with you. *soft kiss on your cheek*
Systematic Decay
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since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........
2 posted 1999-10-24 02:19 PM


How beautiful and sweet.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

3 posted 1999-10-24 03:20 PM


Just lovely!!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396

4 posted 1999-10-24 03:21 PM


Seems that my penchant for voyeurism is receiving a fix today, in Prose.

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Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©


Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
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Purgatorial Incarceration
5 posted 1999-10-26 03:51 AM


I know, EXACTLY the feelings!
Richard 33
Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 187
glen easton, wv usa
6 posted 1999-10-28 01:54 PM


I wrote this poem for Marilyn, I have lots of
strong feelings for her, some how she has
connected with me in a very special way, I
think it is that we have shared alot of the
same feelings. I do not know how it will
turn out, I guess no one knows for sure until it's time.......lol.

[This message has been edited by Richard 33 (edited 10-28-1999).]

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