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~one voice~
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since 1999-07-08
Posts 664
Billings, MT USA

0 posted 1999-08-05 03:11 PM


I am not mortally empowered to reconcile with this mania.
I am not able to encumber serenity alone.
My body tires of trying.
My soul has no color.
Only gray...
And my heart has no feeling.
I long for peace
and I only find in the state of subconciouness.
But, alas, it is so very hard to reach it.
I want to feel love again.
All my heart knows is this pain, this agony,
this longing, and this lonliness.

©1998 Erin Solari


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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."



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Nicole
Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835
Florida
1 posted 1999-08-05 03:25 PM


I have felt this very same way. Very well written!
DreamEvil
Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396

2 posted 1999-08-05 03:54 PM


Nicely done.

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©



~one voice~
Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664
Billings, MT USA
3 posted 1999-08-05 10:08 PM


Thank You both very much!

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."



JP
Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343
Loomis, CA
4 posted 1999-08-05 10:58 PM


It's not easy being gray,
but gray's the color of the sky,
on cloudy day, the scent of the world
enveloped in a quilt of fog.
Gray is the essence of the ash
of embers that burned brightly for a time,
and gray is the feeling of my soul
after yearning for life not to be mine.

~one voice~
Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664
Billings, MT USA
5 posted 1999-08-07 03:24 PM


JP, I am so happy that you understand.

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."



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