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Ruby dagger Member
since 1999-08-01
Posts 76Wyoming, MN, U.S.A |
"Help!" cried an elderly couple who were being robbed by bandits on a little country road barely used. Then they heard heavenly music from off the road. Curiosity got the best of them and they wondered off the road to see where it came from, leaving the elderly couple and their belongings alone. They walked through a meadow, a forest, then they found a beautiful lake with an angel playing heavenly music on a harp. They look around and saw angels in the trees and the clouds. Then the angel playing the harp smiled at the men and rolled a finger telling them to come closer. "Come here," she said while pointing towards right in front of her. The men obeyed. One young man went up to the angel and offered to take her hand. "May I touch this holy hand?" but she just continued to play until she finished her lovely song. "No, you have stole irreplaceable valuables from honest people. You have stolen the innocence from young women. And most of all you have wronged yourself of all the good you could have done. You are here to join my collection." she said in a beautiful voice that sang like the morning lark. "Collection?" he asked weekly. The other men were whispering back and forth nervously. "Collection of souls my dear. I keep evil souls in the lake. There each soul suffering it worst fear. Some fear snakes, some fear heights. There are more. I just need to find your fear." Then she looked deeply into his eyes. He felt as if she was looking into the depths of his soul, which she was. "I see it now, just stay still and it wont hurt that much." she said with an icy chill to her voice that only she could make beautiful. She started to play her harp again. This time the music was fast and up beat. The man started to boil from the inside, then he burst into flames. Screaming his agony with a hand outstretched to his three companions. They got up and ran as fast as they could, but they didn't get anywhere. They were hanging about ten feet in the air, but struggling to get out. Then the angel looked at her next prey and her tune changed slightly. A man with a battle axe appeared and chopped off his hands, feet, legs, arms, then head. The next man had a battle with a woman and lost. His last words were, "Why a girl?" The last man left managed to say one thing before she started the torturer. "How can an angel be capable of doing such horrid things?" "I am not an angel. I am the gods' way of delivering justice," she said in that beautiful icy tone. "Now your turn," she said while striking a cord on the harp. Then she rose off of her chair made of flowers and grabbed a dagger from her blouse with her right hand and made an iron hook appear in her left. She then took the hook and tore his stomach open to let the entrails fall out and took the dagger and slit his arms and legs. Soon he was a big pile of entrails and blood. He looked up at the beautiful angel as she took the dagger and ran it through his head. ------------------ Luv ya Kelly No doubt, this will be a night to remember. -SHeDAISY [This message has been edited by Ruby dagger (edited 08-02-99).] |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Excellent story, Kelly, as always!! A few times you used 'angle' instead of 'angel', and I'll make sure ya fix that like a good friend. Keep up the great work, my friend!!  P.S.-- You know I love the SHeDaisy quote....rock on girl!! ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "I will sail my vessel 'till the river runs dry, like a bird upon the wind, these waters are my sky..." Garth Brooks |
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Dusk Treader
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Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
Great story Kell, I like the angel and her justice very cool. All these country quotes.. Good old depressing Heavy metal is so better..  ------------------ "I'm down in a hole, and I don't know if I can be saved. See my heart? I've decorated it like a grave." - Alice in Chains |
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Ruby dagger Member
since 1999-08-01
Posts 76Wyoming, MN, U.S.A |
Thanks for your support! ------------------ Luv ya Kelly No doubt, this will be a night to remember. -SHeDAISY |
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