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skipsgirl
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0 posted 12-18-2008 11:27 AM       View Profile for skipsgirl   Email skipsgirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for skipsgirl


Good Morning!  I am not a real poet but am trying to come up with a poem to go along with a gift card I am giving my aunt and uncle for christmas.  So far I have:
With the economic woes I didnít know which way to go. So a little gift that may give your spirits a lift.  

I am not really good with wording but want it to say something like weather you need socks or gas this little card will take care of that.  I like the idea of rhyming.  If anyone has any ideas or anything I would greatly appriciate it!  TIA

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1 posted 12-18-2008 12:26 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

how about this?


gifts canít measure
my love for you
and in this economy
whatís a niece to do?

so I sat and I thought
is there something
that could be bought
to convey the love
here in my heart

would it be socks
to keep your tootsies from freezing
a nice perfume,
but would you be sneezing?

instead it occurred to me
something with a bit
of flexibility
so thoughtfully it is
that I send this gift card
with love and always
my warmest regard
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2 posted 12-18-2008 01:55 PM       View Profile for skipsgirl   Email skipsgirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for skipsgirl

I like that! Thank you very much!
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3 posted 12-18-2008 02:17 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

good I'm glad
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'atta gal, SEA!
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