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The First Time
When I look in your eyes the first time,
I cried
When I seen you take your first step,
I cried
When I seen your tears fall from your little cheeks,
I cried

You made my heart beat twice,
You had my soul flowing,
You made me feel whole,

Now he took you away from me,
Iím empty inside, I cant breath,
My eyes feel with tears, they drop on my chair,
I look around, but I see you nowhere,

Daddy said were going somewhere,
But he didnít say mommy wasnít going to be there,
His little hands touch his face, to wipe his own tears,

THIS IS ALL I HAVE FOR NOW BECAUSE IM TO SAD TO FINISH
THIS IS TO MY LITTLE BOY DAVID ANTHONY MUNOZ JR
DADDY CANT HAVE U THAT LONG MOMMY PROMISES TO BE BACK..
 
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