Member Rara Avis
the best thing to do when you don't know what to do is nothing at all... .take it from an expert who tries to figure out what to do and who does a myriad of things, sometimes all at once, just to figure it out, and none of them works and doing them all at the same time just confuses the issues...
but that was just philosophy.... *sigh*
now on to your question.... what should you do with that poem posted in adult which you'd like critique on? i would suggest posting it in a critique forum without restrictions.... such as the scroll... just an idea ... that place has gone NUTS, too, but i can't figure out whether it has anything to do with my presence or absence.... same goes with the rest... who knows whether any of us has any effect,.... if you want the url, i'll send it, just let me know... many of us here at passions met each other originally over there... can be brutal... but sane.... can also be ridiculous... put on your boots....
[This message has been edited by doreen peri (edited 02-02-2001).]