... the old black rum
Well I got this poem..... that gets nice replies in open, but I think I want some more critical analysis
on it, no hold barred critic, to the minute detail so I can learn where it could have been stronger.
I've never posted in CA before too chicken, but I think I like to get more feed back on its structure, flow and flaws......
So is that ok..... Gods and Goddesses of Passions, just one of your humble poets.