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Parker
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... the old black rum


0 posted 05-19-2000 11:17 AM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Well I got this poem..... that gets nice replies in open, but I think I want some more critical analysis
on it, no hold barred critic, to the minute detail so I can learn where it could have been stronger.
I've never posted in CA before too chicken, but I think I like to get more feed back on its structure, flow and flaws......


So is that ok..... Gods and Goddesses of Passions, just one of your humble poets.


Parker

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1 posted 05-19-2000 11:31 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Yes, Parker, that is allowed. You can post your piece in CA even though you've already posted it in Open.

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... the old black rum


2 posted 05-19-2000 11:36 AM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

thank you denise for the quick response.
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You're welcome, Parker. Don't be afraid of the fine folks in CA. They really are wonderful people!  

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Haleyja - When you come outa there - Let us know if they really don't bite, OK??? ....
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