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KSH1991
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0 posted 1999-08-10 01:10 PM


MY BROTHER IS VERY SPECIAL TO ME ADN HAS DONE A LOT FOR ME IN MY LIFE. i NEED A POEM THAT THANKS HIM FOR ALL HE HAS DONE AND ALSO LETS HIM KNOW EVEN THOUGH I DON'T SAY IT I AM VERY THANKFUL FOR EVERYTHING.
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Poet deVine
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1 posted 1999-08-10 11:41 PM


Could you tell me a little bit about your brother? How old...older than you? What things does he do for you? How do you feel when you think of the way you treat him - the way he treats you? Write down some favorite times spent with him.....anything will help me write something for him. Thanks

This young lady responded to me and this is the poem I wrote for her brother Dan. From what she told me they are both wonderful, loving, caring people. He is lucky to have her for a sister as she is lucky to have him for a brother.

To Dan


Sometimes I can’t find just the right words
to tell you what you mean to me
little brothers are supposed to be a pain
but instead, you’ve set me free

You offered me a freedom
that no other could ever give
you opened your home and heart to me
so I could truly live

We used to have such good times
parties and clubs were our scene
and though we may argue
you’ve never treated me mean

I want to thank you Dan
for being my brother and friend
and I want you to know that
my love for you will never end.





[This message has been edited by Poet deVine (edited 08-12-99).]

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