Member Rara Avis
Gee, Ali, I had all but forgotten posting that. As a bit of explaination (and a word of warning for those who might be offended), this chapter of my novel was posted after a discussion about erotic poetry. It's not typical subject matter for me, so I was looking for feedback from some people who wrote it much better than I ever will. And I recieved some really good suggestions, too!
Please be warned, everyone, that this is adult content. Boy, there goes my image...
As for when and where you can find the rest, Ali, the book is about 2/3 done. And, uh, I've hardly touched it since the forums opened... Maybe once we get settled into our new home (the dedicated server), I can get back to work. I hope!