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Angel
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0 posted 08-15-99 04:12 AM       View Profile for Angel   Email Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Angel

I am just starting off as a poet and want to expand my poetic horizons. I don't know all that much about the different types other than the basics (freeverse, rhyming haiku, ect.) If anyone can offer any help with different forms, rhyming or just what I can do to improve my poetry it would be greatly appreciated. Thanks
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1 posted 08-15-99 07:25 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

I'd be happy to help, Angel - The basics are actually pretty darned extensive, though - It's probably best to start with a specific poem and work from there - I'll be sure to comment more explicitly on your work, and feel free to ask me specifics....


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Nay, if our wits run the Wild-Goose chase, I am done:
For thou hast more of the Wild-Goose in one of thy wits,
Than I am sure I have in my whole five.
~ 1592 Wm. Shakespeare ~ Romeo & Juliet ~ ii. iv. 75


Angel
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2 posted 08-17-99 01:34 AM       View Profile for Angel   Email Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Angel

Thanks so much for your help Nan!
Artur Hawkwing
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3 posted 08-17-99 05:30 AM       View Profile for Artur Hawkwing   Email Artur Hawkwing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artur Hawkwing

Rest assured and have faith that I will try to help. I like to do more than commenting ... I like to torture!

(no, really, I don't torture. I give fresh views and comments on how to improve. I can keep an eye out for some of your poems, and show you which lines I like best, and what I think can be done to change this and that, and how I felt about it overall, plain and honest).

So rest assured, either Nan or I will keep an eye out for your poetry.
 
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