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Christmas Eve

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lizzyluv
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since 12-27-2001
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nh, usa. we suck.


0 posted 01-01-2002 05:48 PM       View Profile for lizzyluv   Email lizzyluv   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lizzyluv

aright, i need to ask that the moderators stop left-crunching my lines, as it makes them illegible or confusing in most cases. i am not oaky w/my poetry being tampered w/. soil no longer makes any sense, and i cannot edit it. this is annoying and frustrating to me. i know nearly eveything i've posted has had to be censored (grar), but it makes no sense to me that my lines are being messed, w/as well.
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This poem has been removed by a Passion's Administrator. Lizzy you cannot continue to post poetry with profanity. This is a family forum, and you have been contacted on this issue before. Please review the guidelines a final time.

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is i see [edited by moderator] on this one, i'm gonna cry.


"everyone is broken by something they love and worship"- Francesca Lia Block
*lizzy*


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punksmurf
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new hampshire, U.S.


1 posted 01-01-2002 06:07 PM       View Profile for punksmurf   Email punksmurf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for punksmurf

tehe, what fun, let's blow down x-mas completely!, you know you like the gifts, though, this poem is fun, in that it is completely truthful about how you feel towards x-mas, and many must agree, that this poem should revolutionalize many peep's thoughts on the matter.
say hi to lester! (sea too)
lizzyluv
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nh, usa. we suck.


2 posted 01-01-2002 06:17 PM       View Profile for lizzyluv   Email lizzyluv   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lizzyluv

grar, you're a monkey. this one's uncensored as yet.....
so i hate christmas. so? but is it really too much to ask to never, ever, ever, ever hear the chipmunks again?
i didn't think so.

"everyone is broken by something they love and worship"- Francesca Lia Block
*lizzy*

punksmurf
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3 posted 01-01-2002 06:33 PM       View Profile for punksmurf   Email punksmurf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for punksmurf

"she would say the same thing if you asked her, 'i love you baby, but that, i cannot do'"
-arlington road
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