Ok, I am exposing myself here...you can rip into this if you like.. I wrote it about my sorrow, I was looking for some peace. I wanted to keep this rhyme scheme, but am worried about the poem itself. The wording. sooooo anything you can say to me. I will accept..thanks, floria
Searching For The Light
Walking down the path to sorrow
Unsure of the route I take
Searching for some peace and comfort
Through the night I lay awake
So I trudge along this way, hoping for a brighter day,
Knowing not if I should greet, any soul that I would meet.
Dark and dreary is this journey.
I know not what I'll behold
Long and narrow is the path now
And so heavy is my load.
Hoping for a sweet release,praying that this pain will cease,
Needing for someone to care, someone who my soul would bear.
Then I see a bright light shining.
Through the dark and dreary way
Opening a whole new entrance
To a brightly shining day,
No longer do I feel so sad, neither sorrow neither bad.
I no longer feel alone, For my Light has for me shone.
So I travel on my journey
And lighted now is my way
Peace, joy and contentement follow
Casting all my fears away
My soul is now so full of love, My son is watching from above
Knowing that we miss him so, Feeling all the love we show.
Floria aka strbbux
[This message has been edited by strbbux (12-30-2001 08:27 PM).]