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rich-pa
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since 2000-02-07
Posts 317
New Orleans, Louisiana

0 posted 2001-12-28 04:04 PM


on that soul-bludgeoning cusp
between the object and subject
material and mind

What is the date exactly?
i'm not/never/ever sure
about this that or another
and whenever I think I am
therefore i am not
-then reality sneaks up on me
ever so stealthily-

-I exist liminally
-i am a project for Marx and Lacan
but mostly I am a project for me
-and i ponder and peruse I
wonder and wish
until I don't know
about me or you or them
and even nihlism makes sense

that's about the nature of that
God-[rules is rules guys - just live with it]saving cusp


"freedom is just another word for nothing left to lose..." -janis joplin

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lizzyluv
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since 2001-12-27
Posts 46
nh, usa. we suck.
1 posted 2001-12-28 08:02 PM


that was interesting, i liked the contradictory word play you used. your rhythm is interesting, in that it seems to correlate directly w/your thinking process. the points you're debating could be shattered into so many more pieces of writing. i like.

"everyone is broken by something they love and worship"- Francesca Lia Block
*lizzy*

craigrk
Member
since 2001-12-23
Posts 123

2 posted 2001-12-29 10:27 AM


Where thing meets nothing....there is life. thanks for the read.
rich-pa
Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 317
New Orleans, Louisiana
3 posted 2001-12-29 01:13 PM


hey, who edited my poem!  at least just change the word, you throw off the whole poem, whoever did it!

"freedom is just another word for nothing left to lose..."  -janis joplin

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945
Texas, USA
4 posted 2001-12-29 08:23 PM


Dear rich-pa,
I liked this one-liked the rhythm and flow.

Nan

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