This is a resubmission. I have worked on the rhyme. Usually I don't worry about them - if it fall into rhyme so be it. But you you all think that is required then I shall try to keep a given structure. Is this better?
Crave for caves
When in woods I walk at twilight,
Nature swims within my eyes.
Secret of the night brings delight.
When ocean winds caress my face,
Smell of the sea fills my lungs
Like the joy of first embrace.
When the clouds are out of view,
Spider concealing knits her web,
Leaves sleep blanketed with dew,
Archaic moon speaks of ancient love,
Cities countless commotion ebb,
The night weaves a velvet glove.
When twitter of the woodland bird,
The rush of the raging copper sea
The roaming of the deer heard,
The lush green emerald forestry,
Spin a web of symphony.
I am free.
Like daffodils flinging their heads to sing,
Eyes a glaze in amaze.
Orchestra of twinkling glow-worms ring.
My soul craves for the cave.
My heartbeats in synchrony repeat,
The call of the free and the brave.
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