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punksmurf
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since 01-01-2002
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new hampshire, U.S.


0 posted 01-15-2002 06:43 PM       View Profile for punksmurf   Email punksmurf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for punksmurf

this is the most pointless poem i've ever written, and i'm only posting it for kicks and giggles


it's all your fault
but nothing could ever be
blamed on your sadness
would you like those tears
now
or
Later?
misery today
but you're not listening
you never did
everything is gone today
but nothing was ever, really
There
so now i'm sick

            I'm Dying

~Me
yes the title has absoloutly nothing to do w/the poem, so don't comment on that

© Copyright 2002 Hilda MacKinnon - All Rights Reserved
punksmurf
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new hampshire, U.S.


1 posted 01-20-2002 02:44 PM       View Profile for punksmurf   Email punksmurf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for punksmurf

no wonder you people haven't responded, this poem sucks
~Me
Opeth
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since 12-13-2001
Posts 2224
The Ravines


2 posted 01-22-2002 09:53 AM       View Profile for Opeth   Email Opeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Opeth

Then why did you post it in here?
punksmurf
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new hampshire, U.S.


3 posted 01-22-2002 05:45 PM       View Profile for punksmurf   Email punksmurf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for punksmurf

because i didn't realize it at the time, stupid!
if you're going to respond, make it a worthwile response, christ!
~Me
Chrissy
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since 01-24-2002
Posts 81
Idaho, no I am not a farmer!


4 posted 01-24-2002 04:35 AM       View Profile for Chrissy   Email Chrissy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Chrissy

I dont think this poem sucks, i actually think the only reason people write poetry, because what they write is in their heart...Its like a journal, and for you to sahre your feelings with so many people is a special thing in itsself.  Thanks for the insight.
 
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