Not A Poet
I think it is pretty nice. A little universal, perhaps and a little too sweet too. But there is plenty of room for that in poetry. You have a couple of places where the rhyme seems a little forced and a couple of lines which break rhythm perhaps. Then there are a couple of lines which seem a little too "hallmarkish." I know we use that cliche too much but if you study it after a few days, I think you will see what I mean. I do think you have a good start here and would like to see a revision.