I'm confused. You have winter, spring, and autumn imagery here... it doesn't make much sense to me. Neither does the conclusion. I guess what I'm left asking is, what's the point? There's nothing pulling me into this, you're just describing a hodgepodge scene and ending with an allusion to a happily-ever-after.
I guess I would suggest adding some kind of element to this poem- a narrator, a change, some kind of evident change so it's not so static- as is, it's kind of like a sentence fragment... yeah, we've got all this imagery, but it's doing nothing, going nowhere.
Hope this helped a bit.
"this is not who I meant to be
this is not how I meant to feel" -Ani DiFranco