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KwiatMan Junior Member
since 2001-05-19
Posts 17Florida |
#1 Hoity-Toity The flies on the cow flops in Britain are honey brown, not black and their germs, not crass, have class. #2 Self-esteem My soul lives within. My God shares the same abode. My ego is the tyler of my mind. Jan Kwiatkowski.. |
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Jeen Member
since 2000-06-07
Posts 91 |
Hi I'm stealing someones else's line ..."I'm not in a critiquing mood, but I wanted to say hi." I hate when I get no response to a poem I wrote, so I thought I'd tell you I read a lot of poems today ( and wrote nothing to anyone but you)I just felt like reading without the burden of putting deep thought into words. Jeen |
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Marq Member
since 1999-10-18
Posts 222 |
I like 'Hoity Toity' the best of these. 'My soul lives within' is kind of a non-happening opening for me. Enjoyed the exercise! |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Jan These are cute...short and simple...which can be very fun...yet you also provide a word challege, at least you did for me...very clever indeed. I must admit I had a problem in knowing what you were talking about. Perhaps it is a regional thing ... you are in Florida and I am in Illinois. I had never heard of a cow "flop" and had to read Hoity-Toity twice, and then decided that it must be manure or what I would call cow pies. But that is all right, different usages of words can be fun and challenging and this one did make me think, so that is okay. As for Self-esteem, well, maybe I am brain dead this morning or just too blonde, but I have know idea what, "tyler" of my mind, could possibly mean. What is a tyler, other than a person's name? |
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