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since 2001-01-17

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Australia

0 posted 2001-01-17 12:18 PM

Me feeling jealous, she is a friend
Yes only a friend
But once upon a time I love this friend
We were lovers as if forever
Only until one day everything shattered into a thousand of pieces
That is not easy to put back together
Why should I feel such jealously?
I cannot imagine her being in the arms of another guy
That could have been mine, what have I done wrong
Deep inside me, I still love her
I have one last wish, a wish to put things back together

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this is my first poem

Littlewings
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since 1999-09-19

Posts 62

1 posted 2001-01-18 09:13 AM

I dont want to sound cheesey but I know exactly how you feel in this poem-very easy to follow , simple and true-good job-i really like it

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