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peppermint35
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0 posted 2000-12-21 06:56 PM


Shattered pieces like windowglass
Still held together by edges
Tenuous appearing spider strands
A single breath could part them

Inside a frenzied molten rock
The pressure cooker running
One more ingredient to the pot
And lava flows unending

Laughter that borders lunacy
Undertones of madness
Tears the lurk at the surface
Slip down cheeks without sound

No ease, no rest though weary
In this manic state
Clear thought out of the question
Images roll like a kaleidoscope

Lost, oh lost, whispers the mind
As the last illusion shatters
And naught remains anywhere
Save only one, faithful despair.


Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
Percy Bysshe Shelley

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