Critical Analysis #1 |
Complaits about unfair lives |
sexyILN Junior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 29 |
a centipede is slow but it has one hundred legs a cheetah has but four legs but is very fast the elephant has four legs as well but is slow too how then do we measure things if there is no standard? take people for example you can’t judge people by anything but study and getting to know them and might I add giving them a chance to prove themselves why is it then that animals get a chance to prove their speed but people that should be of utmost importance do not get a chance to prove their personality their loyalty their character? why are people judged by their cover when not even books are judged by covers? why can people accept others who aren’t smart but don’t like anyone mentally challenged? why? why is life so unfair? ...peace as a primary goal, is dangerous because it implies that you will sacrifice any principle for the sake of it.... Avoiding tragedy requires a s |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Hi sexyILN, Reading this piece through, I think it would possibly keep the philosophy 101 forum going for a month, very thought provoking. I feel that you are possibly using the wrong medium for this type of piece, too wordy for a poem, needing more structure, I think maybe you could expand the piece into a philosophical piece of prose, it seems to fall between two camps in its present form. An enjoyable read though, I would be interested to read a revised version. Thank you. Regards, Olias B.T.W. Welcome to C.A. I hope you enjoy it here |
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