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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396
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Can You, Can You Can you see the lightning streaks the blue glass crackl'ing? Can you feel the figures dance the voices as they sing? Can you hear the whispers cry the stems of leaves unfold? Can you taste the bitterness the stories that I've told? Can you sense the liquid hurt in puddles deep as well? Can you, can you know the road of weavings that I shell? [This message has been edited by SpitFire (edited 10-16-2000).] |
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YeshuJah Malikk Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 263 |
I'll hold my horses until I see your 'usual style of writing' |
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kid D Member
since 2000-10-18
Posts 64 |
i think....oh no...lol...you gotta watch out when anyone starts out with "I think"...lol no really i think you concentrated too much on the 'can you's' and didn't think enough about where this was going and what you wanted to say, not sure what the point of this one was... |
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Poertree Senior Member
since 1999-11-05
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Spitfire why did you post this rather than your usual style? your recent post in Open was IMHO in a different league... just an opinion philip |
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