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a poem I posted in another forum
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a poem I posted in another forum |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada 
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I wtote this poem in another forum I would like some more in depth critiques because I was asked to place this in a competiton....thank u Ina Only angels will be brought down to hell, they are cursed with the gift of being kind souls The scream of another breaking bell signify truth and love gone blind The hate and sadness which devours us will never melt away nothing will remain in our angry world I see closeby, love is trying to take form I reached out for it and love breaks before my very eyes. Rage has destroyed what beautiful crushed all good intention cruelty has become plentiful evil, flaws ruin every dimension We are born into this world as angels and die in a world of rage falling from the sky we sail to paradise in the night, another lost soul that love can't buy back In The light there are no detailed shadows, light slowly fades into darkness, we are all hostile strangers in the light all waitng to die, hoping with all our might. The darkness is welcome because I will now have an eternity to rest. I do not want to be a part of this world,this nightmare No,itsn't painless-I just can't feel it anymore. It's has been devouring me for so long I do not care anymore. In fact, I don't even know it's thereanymore. I close the drawer. i welcome death in all its forms. I am scared in a castle full of roses that i ask again and again to leave..... I ask give me rainy dreams until they fade me away I'm crying for rainy dreams, rainy roses that will save from ths tasteless life. "There is no money,there is no possesions, only obbessions, take my money, take my money..I dont need that S***T.." ~Papa Roach Between insects and a |
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