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sash
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since 2000-06-22
Posts 125


0 posted 2000-07-20 11:49 PM




Born with heart and soul;
recource of all human kind,
his words wreak havoc
and searing torture upon MY mind.

Twisted hatred spews
from His every ounce of being.
I am but a target
that he aims at without seeing.




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m3jay
Junior Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 12

1 posted 2000-07-20 11:55 PM


Its is very mysterious.  I like it a lot.  It has a lot of depth.  
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