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Forrest Cain
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since 2000-04-21
Posts 306
Chas.,W.V. USA

0 posted 2000-07-06 12:14 PM


A message not a poem. Some of you know me(spelling
guru) and my brother eldridge jackson AKA James Cain
Now for the bad news we have talked my sister who
will be known as maggie-pie into joining. As
children our mother used to bath us together.
We were short on toys so used maggie as our toy submarine. I fear we held her under to long and I
will warn you up front she's not quite right.
(only kidding mostly)

your friend forrest

© Copyright 2000 O. Forrest Cain - All Rights Reserved
Brad
Member Ascendant
since 1999-08-20
Posts 5705
Jejudo, South Korea
1 posted 2000-07-06 12:20 PM


I think it's great that I can now slice and dice a whole family.      

Brad

Forrest Cain
Member
since 2000-04-21
Posts 306
Chas.,W.V. USA
2 posted 2000-07-06 12:27 PM


Brad there is three more to come.
I'am so sorry but you must work off bad karma

forrest

mysticharm
Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 189
Canada
3 posted 2000-07-06 03:39 AM


Typical brothers...you try and drown her and then throw her to the wolves LOL

is there a special school somewhere that teaches brothers stuff like this, my brothers were the same way and I had 7 but they learned payback can be a ???? LOL...boy I miss them  

debbie

Never underestimate the Power of Purpose.
Yesterday is history.
Tomorrow is a mystery.
Today is a gift.
That's why it's called the 'Present'
unkn

eldridgejackson
Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 91

4 posted 2000-07-06 07:43 AM


Forrest I had forgot the bathing incident.
Now that you bring it up that explains a lot.
If I am not mistaken didn't we give Maggie her first hair cut?

And as I recall she said "Look Mama ain't I purty?"

pasqually
Junior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 23
West Virginia
5 posted 2000-07-06 10:54 AM


I'm the younger sister of Maggie, Forrest, and Eldridge. I can't submit anything here, because I've been so severly traumatised by the three of them (yes, Maggie included)that I barely know my name. They've called me pasqually for so many years that I'm not really sure what my name is? HELP!!!! I suppose Forrest, Eldridge and Maggie got all the talent when it comes to writing. Don't get me wrong--I didn't say "spelling" for Forrest--I said writing. But I think I got all the looks   I hope you don't mind if I check back here from time to time to make sure they're not spreading untruism's here. I'm sure one of them taught me that word.
Poertree
Senior Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 1359
UK
6 posted 2000-07-06 12:28 PM


"and I
will warn you up front she's not quite right.
(only kidding mostly)"

so what's new Forrest !!??.. after you and James I guess the forum could handle anything              

(the winky thingies mean i'm joking btw..lol)

P


allan
Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620
On the road
7 posted 2000-07-07 12:20 PM


Okay Forrest! Thanks - forewarned is forearmed! 'Can't wait!  
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