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amazon_lover
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since 2000-04-09
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland

0 posted 2000-06-29 07:03 PM


Dont you think
itS time for a change

Dont you believe
We do not believe in each other anymore

Dont yoU see
We are tired to see each other

Dont you like to Play
This game of love again

Sky is cleaR for both of us
World is filled with so much good
But we're busy seeing only death and pain
Well,I think we're better than that

Sincerely
A_L


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YeshuJah Malikk
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since 2000-06-29
Posts 263

1 posted 2000-06-29 07:11 PM


You raise an important topic here.  Our technilogical age is certainly giving us the tools to make isolation absolute.  As always, the answer is love.  It alone has power to help us reach each other.  Tell me?  Why the use of 'U' in place of'you'?
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