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mysticharm
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0 posted 2000-06-21 06:58 AM






"Dear Zach"




Silently I sit alone,
staring out to sea.
A tear stained note within my hand,
I wrote to you from me.

It says, "Dear Zach, please forgive me,
it wasn't in my plan.
I just couldn't help but love you,
and I more then understand.

I too cannot betray my heart,
for it has sailed with you to sea.
Your all the man I will ever want,
and Zach, that man, is who I see.



Your mistress is a temptress,
seducing you with charm.
Empty promises of riches,
and keeping you from harm.

Zach she is no good for you,
for the sea can not be tamed.
She does not deserve your love,
she will steal away your dreams.




With each new day I watch the tide,
with hopes she'll set you free.
I have only but one promise for you,
dear Zach, in my heart, you'll always be."    






Never underestimate the Power of Purpose.
Yesterday is history.
Tomorrow is a mystery.
Today is a gift.
That's why it's called the 'Present'
unkn

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