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MelissaNicoleaka mosa New Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 5 |
As i sit here, my eyes begin to sting, as i push away the tears of pain. It's not supposed to feel this way it's not supposed to hurt so much it's supposed to be happy, full of bliss, never ending. Soon i realize taht it can never be that way, regardless of how hard i try, I can never be completely happy until I'm where God wants me to be and even then, I will face hardships, But i will have the Almighty to back me up. But right now, it seems like someone has taken away my heart, and it certainly feels like they have. Something seems to be missing, and regardless of how hard I search and long for it to become apart of me again, it's not time for me to find it. Not yet, I have to wait, I need to trust God, but that's so hard, I don't know if i can do it, it scares me too much. I don't know if i can hang on, but i know that if i let go I'll never get back up again. I just want the pain to leave me, the hurt to fade, and the joy to return. It seems like all hope is gone, but i know--that God can take care of me.So scared--to put it into His hands-- to let Him deal with it. My heart heavy, loaded, and burdend, I feel no release, no relief, only the pressure mounting, the hurt building, I cry out to my father--to deliver me, it seems like no one's there. I look so hard and i can not see. Open my eyes Lord, Open my eyes... |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
Hi Melissa, And welcome to Passions and the CA. I won't try to comment on such a personal writing except to say it is obvious you are hurting. It sounds like you have lost a close loved one or perhaps a love relationship has suddenly ended. In either case, I offer my condolences and encourage you to keep the faith and press onward. Perhaps writing about is a good release. You have eloquently expressed your feelings here and I look forward to seeing more of your writing, hopefully in a more positive mood. Pete |
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